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for Shades of Time

by vbruce

person Tazzy
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* Ooooh! Nice twist!!!! And yeah, Gojya... you're screwed but in a very pleasant way. Just look at the stuff that Sanzo get's away with.

*snerks* Dragons are much fun.
person Tazzy
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*coos* Shi's trying to convince herself that Tenpou's not interested and Tenpou's trying to not jump her right then and there. So lovely.

*snerks* and Konzen comes in doing the big brother thing is beautiful!!!!
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww, it's not right to talk about a lady when she's not quite conscious. Poor Tenpou... but uh, I'll take a beating if he promises to come clean me up. Lovely chapter. It's making me antsy thatthey're thinking the same things but they don't know it. I wanna knock their heads together and be like LOVE EACH OTHER! :P violence solves everything. Eagerly awaiting more! YAY!
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I'm a little behind. First Shi gets caught in a setup, then Gojyo marks a mate? Shi being undressed by Tenpou, and dragons giving love advice? This story is turning into a whirlwind of action and plot advancement. I'm drooling to see how it all turns out! Just when Shi has about given up on Tenpou, he starts to come around with tenderness and attention for Shi. Just when it seems the Sanzo ikkou is about to leave town, more permanent bonds are forming. You write a great story! and write it so well!
person Tazzy
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*coos* Poor Gojya.... but Ai has him pegged so wonderfully.

*hugs him*
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. Xan, tell us how you really feel. Can't say I wouldn't whine if I'd lost Kai >.< Though, I prolly wouldn't have given him up in such a shitty way.
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha! I figured out how to avoid the dreaded "cannot post" error! If I wait until the time officially switches over to the next day, I'm good! NIce chapter. Frightfully intriguing and not quite the way I start off my fantasies, but hey, be open-minded I say. Besides, she seems to heal rather quickly, so who knows.... awesome story and awesome chapter. *plants it and waits for more*
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no!! Now I see where Rei got all her experience in fighting all those 'things' on earth. Not exactly Shi or Tenpou's preferred means of getting naked, but maybe his behaviour in this crisis will convince her that his attitude toward her has sincerely changed. Very imaginative chapter, well written. Too short--more please!
person Tazzy
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gently hugs Shi before offering warm bath and chocolate* Poor girl.
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a sweet scene between Hakkai and Rei. I hope she lives long enough to be waiting for him when the ikkou comes back through. Maybe Xan should just go through with her threat on general principle, you know, to avoid trouble later on. I love your descriptions and attention to detail. Well done! Can't wait until Hakkai and Rei have a chance to spend some intimate time together; that is, if it happened in heaven, too.

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