rate_review Reviews

*cackles8 Go Xan!!!! Give Kanan what she deserves.

And very nice to see Koumyu as well.

*coos* Rei and Hakkai together are simply adorable.

I love the easy way the two commanders -- Tenpou and Shine -- can speak of personal affairs with their seconds. Though they may have known each other for hundreds (thousands?) of years, these seconds are newly discovering their attraction to each other. Of course he's fabulous! I hope the commanders can move on to a more, uh, intimate understanding of each other, too. Time and events are repeating themselves, and I hope Shine comes to a very good understanding of what the 'big deal' is about sex! Goku seems like he is about to come upon a remembrance that will rock the little ikkou off their socks. Excellent chapter, great setup for action to come.

*coos* Love the interaction between Tenpou and Kenren and then Shi and Thiel. *giggles* Especially Shi living vicariously through her second....

More character development and more fun for Gojya. *snickers* Love the interaction between everyone and the little conversation between Xan and Gojya.

Gojyo, Hakkai and Goku are all learning some very interesting things through these conversations. Here and there feelings about their interconnectedness with Rei are trying to push through. Goku seems the closest to having a flashback to Heaven and the inter-relationships there in the past. This is really a great story, well planned out as well as executed. I have no clue what is coming next (in the way of revelations) and am so hooked. Excellent work.

Well, a lot of things are up to Shi as well. I can't imagine how Tenpou is going to approach the subject, but he must have some backbone to be a Field-Marshall. This may be his most important battle yet. I'm sure you'll come up with something brilliant! Don't worry about the short chapters--we're hanging on your every word--and you know how to say a lot with a little. Suspense! Well-written, as always.

*cackles* Poor Tenpou. I really should feel sorry for him, but as he realized, this was a disaster of his own making. Good luck with the chase, Field Marshal. It's gonna be a *LONG* one....

Never let it be said that women aren't willing to bend over backward for Kenren! I wonder what Tenpou is thinking as he stands in the tree line looking at Shine and the boys. The idea of fire armour is creative and cool! Hakkai now has no more excuses to committing. This use of fire is similar to her lightning touch in Heaven. Great writing! Short chapters can be exciting, too! Things are really coming to a head, but I'll be sad to see it all end (new chapters, that is!) Can't wait for more!

*cackles* COngradulations Hakkai, you've finally found the woman of your dreams....

possessive Hakkai is a hot thought. So is fire armor. He DID say he wanted indestructable. Boys should be careful what they wish for ;) Very nice chapter.