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What an interesting description of the use of lightning power! Tenpou is having many observations on how much he _doesn't_ know about Shine. Not only is she beautiful, kind to Goku and kick-ass powerful, but she commands a unit which thinks very highly of her and are loyal to a fault. All this might be too intimidating to him to get past to get to her. He has a lot of past words and actions against her to make up for. Can't wait to find out what Konzen can do for her healing which no one else can do! Inspired and imaginative writing. Your Shine is quite a gal.

*cackles* yeah, they're related....

*snickers* love Xan. Her and Goyja will probably get on like a house on fire.....

So sad. Men are so complete in their denial sometimes. Seems as though Tenpou is about to be slapped out of it though. Squee! Moving on to the next chapter because I'm all excited now.

Hakuryu likes her, so she must be a good girl. Though, I'm trying really hard not to be upset about the shiner she gave Hakkai. We all have moments where we overreact, right? It's ok, he's still beautiful. lol It's about time Hakuryu got pampered! Little lovely. I want one! one to the next chapter!

Wow. o.O Stupid much? I'm like... dumbfounded. That is all. Awesome chapter.

*feels like a bad san franciscan for not knowing that* Interesting background. Dying to get back to Tenpou and Shi though!

Poor poor Tenpou... still struggling. Someone should slap him upside the head, that might help! :DPoor baby Goku getting beat up by fucking stupid ass holes. *oops* little verbal flatulence there. good chapter. Wonder what waking up in her house will be like?

*cheers* Go Shi! Show then why you made general... even if it leaves some of them with nightmares. *smirks* Or wet dreams.

I'd almost feel sorry for Tenpou if I didn't think he deserved to suffer just a bit for what he put Shi through.

Wouldn't it be nice if all those who had lost youkai loved ones due to the Minus Wave could talk to them again as they were before they were berzerk? Rei is unique and special in many ways, but I think it means something that Hakkai could see the ghost, too. I'm sorry, but I just don't feel Kanan's pain. I guess once the eyes of my understanding have been opened they can't be closed again. You have some interesting and unique plot devices here, some I've never seen in other stories. Very well written and imaginative relevations.

*smirks* It does serve Kanan right to be able to see and hear Hakkai and not be seen or heard in return. Sorry, still think she was a coward. And other that they've brought along with them? *evil grin* Do tell....

Thanks for the update. It's a great way to start what is going to be one *long* day at work....