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by Brandon

person Jorgon
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! could you have Ami be caught next by a fire one next?
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it really sucks to be the senshi right now, don't it? And when Minako awakes, she'll either be in the same cage as Rei, or, if the bad guys have any ounce of brains, in her own little cage next to Rei's. I hope the next chapter isn' too long in coming, I actually had to re-read chapter 1 just to remember what was going on before reading the new one. Well, until then. Laters.
person Yosh
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. It's got some good setup and characterization. Good descriptions, too, which made everything easy tp 'see'. I'd love to see more of this story ;)
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Would love to see more.
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating beginning. I look forward to seeing how many of the Senshi they nail before anyone catches on. Though in regards to avoiding the Outers at this juncture, I'd have made Neptune my second target as her intuition also borders on the precognitive, thus making her nearly as big a threat as Mars. But whoever works for you. Laters!

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