rate_review Reviews

Decent for an original character fic. Despite my hate of original characters I try to read them now and again to give them a chance. Only real annoyance I had was many of the characters are pretty far out of character in terms of how they behave and talk. It doesn't feel so much like I'm reading a fic about your character in the Hellsing world as much as I'm reading a fic about a bunch of people that resemble the Hellsing cast a bit. It doesn't help that if you want your original character to be taken seriously, starting off by having all the characters fawn over how utterly beautiful she is isn't a good start. Generally people like me who have a distaste for original characters get turned away the moment we get to hear about how breathtaking and badass your character looks. Just my two cents on the matter if you decide to make another original character fanfiction.

I really like the way you wrote this! It's pulling me down deeper and deeper into the story, and I cannot wait to see where this is going. I hope Alucard and Elizabeth get a little closer together...^^' Update whenever you can, and I'll be back to read more later!

~millenniumthief