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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry about my earlier outburst... I was slightly delirious from the sunstroke I had, and very frustrated with how horrible my vacation was going. ^^;;
Now for an REAL review from me...
here's my personal opinion on short chapters VS long chapters-- I tend to prefer longer chapters better. Why? Because I'm a very fast reader-- I can actually read a 2-page chapter literally in 80 seconds, and without skimming at all. so as an result, sometimes the short chapters feel TOO short to me. It would leave me wanting more to read... and not in the good way at all. however, on the other hand... I don't mind short chapters if it means that there's going to be constant updates every week, or even better, every 3 days or something like that. This would then mean that I would have bunches of short chapters to read in one sitting, and then it'd feel like one long satisfying chapter to me then.
On to the content of the two last chapters: Jeez! I can't believe Watari had became that careless... you would think he was the type to be more careful about giving out things like that. I pegged him as the type who would check the contents of the lifenote, therefore figuring out what it was before giving it out to an compete stranger like that. but I guess you had to figure a way to bring Mikami into the picture :P I wonder, is Light going to go to see him personally in order to try to get his lifenote back?
Now for an REAL review from me...
here's my personal opinion on short chapters VS long chapters-- I tend to prefer longer chapters better. Why? Because I'm a very fast reader-- I can actually read a 2-page chapter literally in 80 seconds, and without skimming at all. so as an result, sometimes the short chapters feel TOO short to me. It would leave me wanting more to read... and not in the good way at all. however, on the other hand... I don't mind short chapters if it means that there's going to be constant updates every week, or even better, every 3 days or something like that. This would then mean that I would have bunches of short chapters to read in one sitting, and then it'd feel like one long satisfying chapter to me then.
On to the content of the two last chapters: Jeez! I can't believe Watari had became that careless... you would think he was the type to be more careful about giving out things like that. I pegged him as the type who would check the contents of the lifenote, therefore figuring out what it was before giving it out to an compete stranger like that. but I guess you had to figure a way to bring Mikami into the picture :P I wonder, is Light going to go to see him personally in order to try to get his lifenote back?
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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
being forced to go on a family vacation even though I was an adult, and being dragged throughout the states in a very baking hot car for what seems like forever turned it into two weeks of hell... ;_; and to make things worse, both my arms got so sunburned badly that I actually have blisters forming all over it.... I was actually wearing sunblock but I was sweaty, etc in a car that was literally 99 degrees hot... so it wore off way too fast. *sniffle* I really, really, hate cars and my family right now as you can tell....
so yeah I was super unhappy..... was looking up things on the internet to distract me at this lake resort house to distract me from my pain. your two updates cheered me up big time for a while.... so it was pretty effective. :) seriously, that's how much I enjoy your fan fiction, if it can make me forget about my poor arms for a few.
at least I get to go home tomorrow hopefully...then I can work on updating at least two fanfictions of mine as a gift to you! (hopefully). and never leave my apartment again! whahaha.
I find it funny that my recaptcha thing says: "Evilest 60-day"...that's how my so-called "family vacation" felt to me...
so yeah I was super unhappy..... was looking up things on the internet to distract me at this lake resort house to distract me from my pain. your two updates cheered me up big time for a while.... so it was pretty effective. :) seriously, that's how much I enjoy your fan fiction, if it can make me forget about my poor arms for a few.
at least I get to go home tomorrow hopefully...then I can work on updating at least two fanfictions of mine as a gift to you! (hopefully). and never leave my apartment again! whahaha.
I find it funny that my recaptcha thing says: "Evilest 60-day"...that's how my so-called "family vacation" felt to me...
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it please hury up i red all 20 chapters in less then 6 hr T_T i want more i love you * hugs your waist and wags tail * shadow loves you too ( speak for yourself i dont love anyone though i must agree that the story is very good ohh and please ignor my creators useless banter ) * rools eyes ( she tends to ramble on and on )
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Evil-Kira-That's-Not-Raito has the LifeNote!! The audacity! Please update again soon, I absolutely adore this story <3
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August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaah, wait.
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If Mikami has the notebook, that means he knows L's full name.
D:
EH.
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If Mikami has the notebook, that means he knows L's full name.
D:
EH.
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite Death Note story yet, I do hope you get your sequel out soon!
The concept of Light being reborn is awesome, and even making him half human, half monster. I love it! Keep up the good work. :3
The concept of Light being reborn is awesome, and even making him half human, half monster. I love it! Keep up the good work. :3
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July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.o ....whoa...yay!!! keep it up, still loving this!!! XD
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July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just.. WOW! O.O drools over the keyboard.
Dont you dare call yourself a lousy lemon writer! It was fantastic and breathtaking and sexy and did I mention fantastic? I absolutely adored the foreplay scene.
Really, this was the best lemon I have read in the last few weeks. please write moooorrreee. Do not let this be the only one in your wonderful story! It will get so lonely, and will cover in a corner on its lonesome whimpering pitifully with teary eyes until you give it a companion little lemon scene. Please please please! puppy eyes
Dont you dare call yourself a lousy lemon writer! It was fantastic and breathtaking and sexy and did I mention fantastic? I absolutely adored the foreplay scene.
Really, this was the best lemon I have read in the last few weeks. please write moooorrreee. Do not let this be the only one in your wonderful story! It will get so lonely, and will cover in a corner on its lonesome whimpering pitifully with teary eyes until you give it a companion little lemon scene. Please please please! puppy eyes
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg! i love your writing!! i hope you'll continue this, i like the way you've built this. and i DO hope for more lemons, your a great author even in this aspect!! ^__^
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD "Lemony Goodness!!" And that it was, great job! I can't wait to read more, this one of my favorite stories and I was so happy to find 2 new chapters this morning :) Thank you <3