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by anlaaria

person Aynessa
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOODNESS. I cannot believe you just ended it like that. I sincerely and desperately hope that is not the true end of this ridiculously fabulous story, because I am utterly enthralled and I demand more. D: Your characterization of the both of them is just so...so...so breathtakingly accurate and beautiful to behold. And CC! It's like I'm watching this on my screen, it's so vividly accurate to these tortured characters. I *adored* the part where Lelouch tells Suzaku that he both loves and hates him, and will never do so more for anyone else in the world. And Suzaku's tears as he tries desperately, time and time again, to keep Lelouch from dying is just so.....gah, you've reduced me into incoherent gibberish. I absolutely adored this story beyond words, and I really hope there's more to come.
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice. This powerplay-initiated-sex is so much more in character than LuluxSuzu already lusting after each other in their Ashford school days. And you kept Lelouch's sexual innocence too! (Ah, if only I can put this on a watch list or something so I could find it when you upload a new chapter... ) Keep it up~
person pril6000
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
totally awesome fic, literate and smutty!
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to giggle every time I hear 'cockpit' now. Amazing story - is there another chapter in the works?
person Hira-San
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Has anybody ever told you that you're awesome? If not then let me say that you've gone past that to godly-ness....*runs off to worship you*
person Slice
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For some reason while I was reading this I kept expecting one of them to have hit the audio button accidentally and projected their entire affair to anyone below who was unfortunate (or fortunate?) enough to be around.

Anyway, good chapter. Everyone enjoys steamy cockpit sex. This fic along with your other one are a joy to read and I always look forward to your updates.
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this one's awesome. I love the characterization and how much tension there is between Suzaku and Lelouch.
Also, sex in the cockpit. Awesome. And switching. I love it.
person Eline
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sex in the cockpit of the Lancelot is my favourite kink (right next to hatesex in the cockpit) at the moment. Asides from drooling over the hot, hot sex, I love how the walls are coming down between them at last.
person yaoiokami
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I read Primary Gain on FF.net also and I have to say that your style of writing intrigues me. You just capture the characters so beautifully that I can NOT stop reading. I like how you throw in that humor. It never fails to have me laughing quietly (It's almost always late when I read or I'm taking care of my two month old nice who is sleeping) although I do regret it because I know I would laugh to my heart's content. I like laughing as loud as I can... ^_^ Anyway, hope you update soon!
person Eline
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of all the post-Ragnarok-pre-Requiem fics, I love this one for exploring the relationship between the two of them towards the end while keeping the boys in character. I am patiently waiting for them both to wake up and accept their slightly f-ed up co-dependency. (This fic makes me happy because Lelouch shows Suzaku how to work the cape, includes C.C, and having Lelouch as a person who analyses a blowjob from a technical and behavioral perspective. Oh, and the porn and the angst. ^^)

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