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October 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written :) I like how Natori appeared to me as kept in OC, had he wished for such things. Had it ever gone down I agree that their first encounter would be very innocent and mild like this.
The leading to it could have been longer, with more description of what Natsume'd think about it all, maybe flashes to their developing relationship a friends and so on. It would have suited it well with a good build up :)
Good job *thumbs up*
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
just finished rewatching the first two seasons of this anime. they would make a hot couple
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October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok this was awesome; there needs to be more Natsume fanfiction and I really enjoyed this a lot. I hope you make more in the future.
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September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More chapters please.
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute fic! I liked how gentle and sweet in was, and the sex was hot without getting actually pornographic. It's nice to see a fanfic for the series, and I think you did a very god job with it! Thank you for writing, I definitely enjoyed reading your fic.