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Hmm, why do I think Meilin's gonna get hurt? Oh, well. As to the divination, it goes as follows(mind you, this is taken from the original Japanese as that's the only DVD I have on hand):

Step 1: Mix the cards thoroughly with your left hand. Step 2: Return them to the pile, and then cut into three piles with left hand, then restack them into one pile in any order you want. Step 3:Draw the cards and set them in the following order - first one at the top, then one to your side, then third in the lower left, then another to your side, and then the scene jumps tot he complete layout which is a diamond shape of 1, 2, 3, 2, and 1 cards from top to bottom. Step 4: Close eyes and repeat the following chant - "Cards created by Clow, reply to my query. Show before me the true guise of the one standing in my way." Step 5: flip the top card - in this case, it was Windy, indicating knowledge had gotten out to the other cards about Sakura. Step 6: Flip over the center three cards - in this case Shadow, Watery, and Illusion(in that order), indicating a relationship to those three. Final Step: Look at the card that's on the bottom of the remaining pile to determine what the card is currently after - in this case it was Flower, indicating Touya(whose name in Kanji means "Peach Arrow" according to the subs.). And there you have it.

Well, until chapter 25, then. Laters.(I do believe I just topped myself...)

Hehe, poor Syaoran, probably not how he expected to see Sakura in the buff for the first time. But it could have been worse, Little could have succeeded in tapping him, too, or Touya could have gotten in before he made the closet. And I would note that in the original episode the wand actually stayed normal size, and Sakura had to restore her size before sealing Little(after getting blown out a window, dodging a praying Mantis then a cat, going through her bathroom window and taking a quick swim across her furo, and then dodging her brother's feet to avoid an untimely squishing before finally being found and given a ride by Kero, and all while being ironically dressed in an outfit reminiscent of Alice of Alice In Wonderland; Syaoron wasn't even in the ep.!). And to do that she had to re-touch Little, which occurred in the upstairs hall just seconds before Tomoyo got a similar treatment. But yours works, too, if in only because you need to squeeze in a quick explanation of Siana and Fei Wong. Until chapter 24, then. Laters.(I do believe this is the longest review I've ever written...)

Well, looks like Josh and Wulf are all the way in now, more or less. Seems this time Wulf and Meilin aren't coming together too soon, though. Oh, well. Until chapter 20, then. Laters.

Yeah, those double signings are gonna cause issues down the line. And I notice you left out Sakura accidentally destroying her father's laptop, and all the work there on, in the process of the capture, though you did kinda speed up the order of events there slightly. Oh, well. Until chapter 22, then. Laters.

Ooh, I sense imminent pummeling. Not that his luck in the original version was any better, course there she arrived just after they'd gotten dry, and he'd given Sakura one of his dry shirts to wear, one Meilin had given him. Yeah, definite pummeling. Well, until chapter 19, then. Laters.

Decided not to wait unitl the Eriol saga to get them together, huh? Okay, I'm good with that. Well, until chapter 18, then. Laters.

I was wondering when you were going to bring the Rain in, since you removed it from the Wood capture. Also, you put a [1] next to Akane's name, but there's no note at the bottom, just so you know. It also occurs to me you could be slightly "naughty" with the Little card, having shrink Sakura without shrinking her clothes(and then have her refer back to this "problem" come time for the Big card!). Just a thought. Until chapter 17, then. Laters.

Hmm, so how long until Josh and Wulf are in all the way? I'm guessing not long, and I know Meilin's arrival is just around the corner. And are you actually gonna do every single card, or at least every single one that was captured in the anime on screen(which would really only exclude Wave, Libra, and Through)? And speaking of waits, when does the "naughtiness" get started? Well, until chapter 15, then. Laters.

Interesting way to retell the Time Card, what with it actually having a reason other than general mischief for the time loop. Well, until chapter 13, then. Laters.

Hmm, two eps. for the price of one, I see. By the way, you kept saying "peddles" when you meant to say "petals". And Sian again?! Wasn't he hard enough to whack the last time?! Ah, hell, your story... Laters.