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And somehow I think that still won't get through to Touya! Oh, well.... Hm, no, I just don't see Eriol becoming a couple with Shienna, not after their history; okay, okay, I know, he's not Clow Reed, but he does have Clow's memories, and that's arguably close enough. As to Ember, I'm honestly not sure. While it could get things a little more interesting, what little we've seen of him does tend to paint him as a good guy, if somewhat naive and innocent, but then that goes with being a child, doesn't it? It could honestly work either way for me, really. Well, until chapter 87, then. Laters.

Well, the elders are arguably in the shit house now, huh? And Trenton's not doing so well, either, is he? Just not a good day to be a bad guy. I look forward to the next set of developments. Until chapter 86, then. Laters.

Oooh, those damn elders. I don't suppose Trenton's going to conveniently pop over to Hong Kong after them and wind up killing the elders for them? yeah, I know, too much to ask... But I imagine their attempt to kill Sakura and punish Syaoran will blow up in their faces big time regardless. As to your question, I don't honestly know; why do some fanfic writers put Zuko and Katara together, or Aang and Toph together? Some just like the different coupling, I suppose. Well, until chapter 85, then. Laters.

Well, that takes care of those problems, provided the Agency didn't have off site backups. At least Sonomi is sort of seeing the light. And now all that's left is Trenton and the mystery of Ember. Until chapter 84, then. Laters.

Whoo, looks like you're finally building to a finale in regards to the agency. Be nice to see them go...into a Hell dimension, that is! Hehhehheh... As to Trenton, looks like he's finally learning from his mistakes, huh? Oh, well, it was bound to happen eventually... Until chapter 83, then. Laters.

Hmm, seems to me like nothing's really changed on the Trenton front, though that may be because they have Eriol around for the moment, right? As to Sonomi, I think Sakura broke her in that last scene, so there may not be a shipping off to an all girl's school, after all, yes? Well, until chapter 82, then. Laters.

Yeah, Sonomi is being a bit stubborn, huh? And as to Eriol/Mitsuki, I believe there was implications of them being together at the beginning of the second movie, but I could be wrong. And I must say this - CONTINUITY ERROR! CONTINUITY ERROR! CONTINUITY ERROR! I seem to recall that Viktor already knew everything about the cards, okay the kids may have left our mentioning the Lovers, being told all after being rescued from Dr. Fermont. You may want to rewrite that a little? Just saying. Well, until chapter 81, then. Laters.

Scratch one slave trader. The computer virus sounds good, though, just need to figure out how to do it without the asses tracing it back to our heroes. As for Shienna and Eriol winding up having sex, I think that's what he has Mitsuki for, so no, don't see it happening. Until chapter 80, then. Laters.

Well, I suppose that is one way to take her down. Almost karmic punishment, really. Course, now Trenton's worse than ever! And of all the lousy times for a mission. Pity Eriol can't just wipe out all of their memories in one fell swoop, that'd help immensely. It'll be interesting to see what he does do. Well, until chapter 79, then. Laters.

As amusing as all that was, is this really the time for Eriol to be a wise ass? At least now they can put together a plan to get rid of Shienna. And the scene breaks are fine, by the way. Oh, well, until chapter 78, then. Laters.