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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so he's just greedy for power! Figures... Now, if they could just figure out his first name and how to depower him, or whatever. And Ember's "true form" is a dragon, huh? Okay. I look forward to more. Until chapter 67, then. Laters.
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I see you worked my little thought in, nice. A boy, huh? And yeah, jealousy does seem to be the order of the day, don't it? Now, surely Tomoyo's mother knows about Josh, at least, doesn't she? I mean, her little girl's only bee going out with him for I believe two years now? Ah, well, either way, this is going to get real interesting in real short order, though I must ask, what about Touya, and for that matter, where's Yukito/Yue? I'd think they'd want both main guardians in play on this one. Well, until chapter 66, then. Laters.
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Who, indeed? It'll be interesting to see how this develops, and how they find out who it is. I'm especially curious about the new guardian, Ember. Is he really Sakura and Sayoran's, or a plant disguised to seem like he was made by Sakura and Syaoran?! Can't wait to find out.
Also, with this sentence - "Uh, if you're in there, then what is...,ahhh!" she shouts seeing a sleeping white creating that looked similar to Kero's false form. - did you perhaps mean creature?
Well, until chapter 65, then. Laters.
Also, with this sentence - "Uh, if you're in there, then what is...,ahhh!" she shouts seeing a sleeping white creating that looked similar to Kero's false form. - did you perhaps mean creature?
Well, until chapter 65, then. Laters.
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, an interesting question... I'm not sure about appearance or gender off the top of my head, but for motivation, the first thing that comes to mind is jealousy over Sakura's accomplishments and her possession of the cards. That, or desiring the cards her/himself. Possibly even a family grudge thing of the "it's gotten completely out of hand" variety. As to the chapter itself, nice conversation with Fujitaka, nice that he's taking it well. I look forward to whatever you choose to come up with. Until then. Laters.
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the cousin idea doesn't sound half bad. Aside of that, yeah, I got nothing... Until chapter 63, and possibly the finale, then. Laters.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, haven't a clue outside the events of movie two. So I'll take finishing them off in the next chapter. Until the finale, then. Laters!
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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And so much for Fermont, though I imagine we'll see him one last time when he discovers Josh's surprise. And Fey's final plan is pretty dastardly. I notice you missed that the Wood card was supposed to be changed, too, but you can easily just toss that in to the last big transformation spree. Well, until chapter 61, and the transformation of the Snow and Return cards, then. Laters.
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, definitely building to a climax with Fermont, and I notice that with the bits you used from episode 66, you left out the changing of the Maze and Illusion cards, or are you going to do those for the battle with Fermont? Ah, well, either way, we're closing on the finish, and along with those two, next up are Glow, Wood, and Thunder. Until chapter 60, and more transformations, then.
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting to see Sian make a Golem for a change, probably the only way to squeeze one in here and have it week enough for the kids minus Sakura and Syaoran to destroy it, huh? And the last bit with the death glare contest was lol worthy! Well, until chapter 59, and the saving of Yue, then. Laters.
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And Fey's starting to get a little more active again, too, I see. Just a matter of how to buy time to take out Fermont first. Speaking of, in his scene this chapter, you had Viktor say "their" when you meant him to say "there". Also, after Eriol bursts the dimensional bubble, you have say now twice in the same sentance, you should drop one, just saying. Ah, well, until chapter 58, and the changing of the Time card, to be followed by the final saving of Yue/Yukito, then. Laters.