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Hey, at least you're back. Um, I sort of meant for the Through card to do the yanking them out of their clothes through a wall trick, but this works too. And Dr. Fermont is new; sounds more annoying than threatening, though. Well, next up is the Lock card, so it'll be interesting to see what you do with that one. Until chapter 35, then. Laters.

So, uh, been a while since you last posted, real life intrude majorly or something? Just wondering... Hellooooo.....

And another one bites the proverbial dust. Up next is the Voice. And is kissing all that Meilin and Wulf are up to, or has it...escalated? Hehheh... Well, until chapter 34, then. Laters.

I guess your chapter for Freeze went up just after I sent in the review, or close to at any rate. And now we reach the jump with three cards still to be "accounted for". I suppose for Bubbles(which I admit I previously forgot about) you could always have a mass bubble wave cleaning up the dirtier streets(considering the one time we saw it used after it was transformed was to wash Keroberos). While I'm not sure what mischief Through might do, it could always pull another flesh but not clothes, that is, it could grab one ore both of our cardcaptors and yank them through a wall, leaving their cloths back on the original side(hehheh...). And finally as to Libra...I haven't the foggiest.... Until chapter 33, then. Laters.

Hmm, interesting that that you put in a time jump between the two when in the ep. Naoko picked up the Create earlier the same day and began writing within minutes of Big's capture. Also, in the show the Create did have a story in it, it just wasn't finished, which Naoko proceeded to begin doing, stopping only when she decided to go to bed. And why did you sort of gloss over Change, out of curiosity? And a thought for next time - Wave could pop up in cahoots with Freeze, using it's power to effectively widen the area of Freeze's attack, or something like that. Well, until chapter 31, then. Laters.

My, but Dash was a naughty little card, molesting poor little Jessie in her sleep like that. Hehheh... Well, I believe next up is the Create and, slightly more importantly to this story, the Big. Can't wait to see what you do with them. Until chapter 30, then. Laters.

Okay, I suppose that works for covering the Arrow. I still would have like d to see you work in the events of the first movie, though... Ah, well, no matter, next up is the Sweet card. Until chapter 28. Laters.

Neat way to work in their weapons of choice from Heroes Saga. And when you listed the pair offs for the project, you didn't include Meilin's name, just Sakura, Syaoran, Tomoyo, Josh, and Wulf. Might want to fix that. Well, I believe the Dash card and it's temporary "protector" Rei Tachibana(Jessie in the dub, unless I'm mistaken) is up next. Until chapter 29, then. Laters.

Hmm, I suppose that's one way to cover that particular card. And interesting first golem, I might add. By the way, I was under the impression that Syaoran was a direct descendant of Clow himself, so that would sort of make him descended of Clow's mother by default, would it not? Might want to rephrase the sentence a little. As to the three unseen captures, I'll think it over and get back to you on that when you're closer to that particular little "jump". And do you mean to say you're not going to cover the movies? Why not? Well, until chapter 27, then. Laters.

Hmm, seems like the Lovers form of mischief is to get couple all hot and bothered, eh? I look forward to when it finally gets results! Meanwhile, I believe the Return is up next. By the way, out of curiosity, what are you going to do when you get to the Arrow, which was captured at the beginning of the first movie? Or the Libra, Wave, or Through, for that matter, whose captures were never actually seen on screen? Until chapter 26, then. Laters.