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Probably the best Melancholy lemon fic I've ever read. This site, ffn, whatever.

 

A very interesting premise. Also reminds me of the mystery elements of the book, and the way they are presented usually.

I do wish Nagato's actions in CH1 were cleared up earlier. But it's just a mark of how engaged I was.

Please consider continuing this story. It's very well written, well visualized and frankly has a more cohesive plot than 90% of the G to T rated fiction I've run across. It's definitely in the top 10% of Haruhi fanfiction written period. You had me hooked at the ending of the first chapter and kept me hooked the whole way through. The idea that Haruhi is subconsciously controlling what Kyon is thinking is an idea that I've never seen considered in a fic before and it intrigues me greatly.

A number of things. Am I correct in assuming kyon committed suicide in ch1?

How big is Kyon? THE percentages used for mass and hardness are not very good indicators by themselves.

I have not read Haruhi in a LONG time and I only got half maybe 2/3 of the way through the series chronologically before it was taken down.

Am I seriously going to get a lecture from Sasaki while I'm having sex with Nagato? This really _is_ like a bizarre h-manga!
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I see nagato lecturing Haruhi on how the harem is set up as a pack with HAruhi and Kyon being Alphas and Koizumi being a Guardian who gets his sex from women he seduces to better protect the pack.

Going to upload this review here. Need to fine print your chapters. I have skimmed sections due to reading other stories as well. Two monitors make a lot of things possible.

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Very nice story (exciting lemons + good plot)! I enjoyed it alot, especially Sasaki and Haruhi part^^ Also, what do you think of adding some Asakura?

Didn't notice that you had updated this fantastic as usual.
Nagato/Mikuru is super adorable and I want to see some more. Most of this is a mix of the usual super fluffy smutty goodness we've been getting from chapter 3 but remember that you have this story written with a very dark premise and that's something I think you should explore at some point to mix it up.
I can't wait for more.

It continued! I think this new chapter might do with a little editing (for instance, you overuse _these things_), but the content's pretty good overall, and the character interactions are as cute as ever. I'm eager to read what happens next.

I love this fic. I love it, I love it, I love it. Please continue it!

Fucking good. Really wish you would update this fix soon. There really are not enough MoHS stories.

The eroticism of these chapters is pure gold. I also have a fetish for cum-inflation and impregnation, and Mikuru's pleas to get knocked up are always fun. I don't suppose you have any lactation or breast growth scenes in mind? With the threesome with Yuki coming up, it'd be really hot to see Mikuru leak milk, and maybe Yuki swell and lactate as well to compete.