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September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was worried this was dead, glad to see it updated. The idea of what Haruhi and Sasaki might say to each other is interesting, especially if Haruhi's still mentally repressing details. Gonna have interesting fallout if the world reverts back.
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January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see that this is still alive. This chapter makes me wonder what exactly Haruhi wishes for. Obviously this is from Kyon's POV but does what does she want from this, even if she won't admit it?
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September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sasaki! I think this is maybe one of two or three total that have her in any way paired with Kyon and almost definitely the only lemon. Should we assume the cervix thing is from Haruhi as well? No offense, but in reality even if you could get that far in, it would just cause a lot of pain. As for what's next...I don't want to write your fic for you (especially when it's pretty good) but what about dates?
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September 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So yeah this is pretty much a great bit of work. I don't often sit down to actually read something with plot on this site, but I'm actually interested in where this one is going. Partially because I love Sasaki's character and feel like she's not used often enough, but also because, more so than pretty much any haruhi fic involving sex, it's rather close to being in character.
Looking forward to more.
Looking forward to more.
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Sasaki. For a character I love she seems to get a lot of bad press. Sadly no roleplaying in this one, but at least Haruhi can be patient. Out of curiosity, was Mikuru really just 'roleplaying' at the end? Hope the next chapter arrives soon!
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Writing's good and I've wished there were decent Haruhi/Kyon/Mikuru fics but Kyon seems a bit passive considering it's his first time. Any chance of Sasaki appearing?
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good stuff, and good to see other Haruhi writers. I never really like first person perspective which is why I avoided this story for so long, but you used it pretty well in this story. You're style is interesting, not completely polished, but solid with a lot of phrases that stand out, like diamond studded steel. I can't wait to see where you go with this story and future stories.
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August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn you really went all out on this chapter.
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like what I'm reading so far, keep it up.
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. Can't wait to read more